Good Things/ Improvements: This task was create a storyboard for the script Derek Hayes had assigned for us entitled "Section for Deep Screen Play for storyboard". The storyboard above was one I created simply for aesthetic. The one below is the one I submitted for assessment alongside the script to clarify what is happening.
Overall, I am happy with the aesthetic, characters facial expression and linework. I feel to imrpove I would add missing key parts of the script such as when Inspector Small puts down his hat, also there are some mismatching moments such as when Caroline is meant to be holding the folder and give it to Inspector Small. However, I feel the storyboard portrays the gist of the scene and overall I am happy with it.
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